Another story/screenplay idea, feedback plz :)?

the title is "Ultra-light" it's a sci-fi story. its set in the year 4100, 1,000 years after humans had 2 abandon sol (our sun) and go to a planet called "eridani B" (yes its real, its 10.5 lightyears away lol). basically humans have mastered space travel and in certain places can jump 2 "ulralight speed" hence the title. it follows the crew of the E.A.S (Earthlican Alliance Ship) andromeda when it's tasked with escorting a giant "orb" into dark space as scientists have reason to believe there is another spacefaring species out there. there are more twists but i dnt wanna give anything away haha